Student's Writing

Title: diet

I can't wear the pants because i'm too fat.
Therefore i trying to lose weight by going on a diet.
I eating less meat and more vegetables.
My doctor told me to exercise more often.
But why do i hate exercise so much!

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Student's Writing
Title: diet

I can't wear the pants because i'm too fat.
Therefore i trying to lose weight by going on a diet.
I eating less meat and more vegetables.
I'm eating less meat and more vegetables.

My doctor told me to exercise more often.
But why do i hate exercise so much!