Student's Writing

Title: my brother's day
My brother's name is min-su.
He eats breakfast at 7:00.
He gets on the school bus at 8:00.
He come back home at 2:00.
He does his's homework at 3:00.
He goes to bed at 9:00.

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Student's Writing
Title:my brother aday
Title: My brother's day

My brother name is min-su.
My brother's name is Min-Su.

He gets up at 6:00.
He eats breakfast at 7:00.
He gets on the shcool bus at 8:00.
He does to the homework at 3:00
He does his homework at 3:00.

He goes to bed at 9:00