Student's Writing

Title: basketball

I play the basketball.
I like playing basketball with my friends.
I always played game hard.
but My team is lost today.
I was very glommy.

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Student's Writing
Title: basketball

I play the basketball.
I played basketball today.

I like playing basketball with my friends.
I always played game hard.
I always play the game hard.

but My team is lost today.
But my team lost the game today.

I was very glommy.
So I was so gloomy.