Student's Writing

Title: my hobby

My hobby is watching movies.
I watching  movie finding nemo today.
It was an interesting movie.
Nemo is a small fish.
He travels to find his dad.
I want to Nemo swimming well

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Student's Writing
Title: my hobby

My hobby is watching movies.
I watching  movie finding nemo today.
I watched the movie 'Finding Nemo' today.

It was an interesting movie.
Nemo is a small fish.
He travels to find his dad.
I want to Nemo swimming well
I want to swim well like Nemo.