Student's Writing

My sister's skin is white and clean
But she has a big mole on her face
She took out the mole this weekend
As a result, her skin tone is became better

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Student's Writing

My sister's skin is white and clean
But she has a big mole on her face
She took out the mole this weekend
As a result, her skin tone is became better

아래의 글은 전에 작성된 선생님의 첨삭물입니다.  새로운 첨삭물을 보낼 때는 아래의 글을 삭제하십시오.
Student's Writing
My sister's skin is white and clean
But she has a big mole on her face
She took out the mole this weekend
As a result, her skin tone became better