Student's Writing

I like eating between meals
After school, I ate bread and drank milk as snack
On my way back home, I also ate Dduckbbogi
When I got home, dinner was almost ready
Since I've snacked much, I didn't feel like eating dinner

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Student's Writing
I like eating between meals
After school, I ate bread and drank milk as snack
On my way back home, I also ate dduckboggi
On my way back home, I also ate Dduckboggi.

When I got home, dinner was almost ready
Since I've snacked so much, I didn't feel like eating dinner