Student's Writing

We had a physical examination at school today
I grown 5cm just in 1 year
But I gained a lot of weght comparison how to much 
My weight is 43kg
I think it's because I ate a lot of hamburgers and pizza
From now on, I'm going to a lot of vegetables

아래의 글은 전에 작성된 선생님의 첨삭물입니다.  새로운 첨삭물을 보낼 때는 아래의 글을 삭제하십시오.
Student's Writing

We had a physical examination at school today
I have grown 5 cm in just 1 year
But I gained a lot of weight in comparison to how much I grew
My weight is 43kg
I think it's because I ate a lot of hamburgers and pizza
From now on, I going to eat a lot of vegetables

아래의 글은 전에 작성된 선생님의 첨삭물입니다.  새로운 첨삭물을 보낼 때는 아래의 글을 삭제하십시오.
Student's Writing
We had a physical examination at school today
I have grown 5 cm in just 1 year
But I gained a lot of weight in comparison to how much I grew
My weight is 43kg
I think it's because I ate a lot of hamburgers and pizza
From now on, I going to eat a lot of vegetables
From now on, I'm going to eat a lot of vegetables.