Student's Writing

Today, we held the election of class president and vice president
It will selecting of students 
Three 
The nominess were Minsoo, Jiho, Eunbi
I voted for Jiho
I real wanted to run election of the president but I didn't have         to do so

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Student's Writing

Today,we held to the elections for class presedent and presedent
It is for selecting the student
Three 
The     were Minsoo, Jiho, and Eunbi
I voted for Jiho
I

아래의 글은 전에 작성된 선생님의 첨삭물입니다.  새로운 첨삭물을 보낼 때는 아래의 글을 삭제하십시오.
Student's Writing
Today, we held the elections for class president and vice president
It was for selecting students who will work as our class representatives for the next semester
Three nominated students competed for these two positions
The nominees were Minsoo, Jiho, and Eunbi
I voted for Jiho
I actually wanted to run for this election, but I didn't have the courage to do so