Student's Writing
Today is the Children's day
I went to the Everland theme park with my mom and friends
There were a lot of people there because it was holiday
There were a lot of people there because it was a holiday.

In order to get on one of the rides, I had to wait in line for a very long time
My legs were aching but the efforts payed off and I got a chance to get on many of the rides
My legs were aching but the efforts paid off and I got a chance to get on many of the rides.

Riding roller coaster was fun.I thought I was going to fall on the ground during the ride
I am grateful toward my mom for bringing me and my friends to the theme park