Student's Writing

My uncle bought a box of chocolates today
There was vanilla cream in the chocolate
It was sweet cholcolate I loved it
But my mom doesn't like sweet chocolate
All of my family ate chocolate except my mom

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Student's Writing

My uncle bought a box of chocolates today
There was vanilla cream in the chocolate
It was the sweet chocolate that I loved
But my mom doesn't like the sweet chocolate
All of my family ate chocolate except my mom

아래의 글은 전에 작성된 선생님의 첨삭물입니다.  새로운 첨삭물을 보낼 때는 아래의 글을 삭제하십시오.
Student's Writing
My uncle bought a box of chocolates today
There was vanilla cream in the chocolate
It was the sweet chocolate that I loved
But my mom doesn't like the sweet chocolate
All of my family ate chocolate except my mom