Student's Writing

I am practicing playing the piano to become a pianist
Lately,I heard the news that a small girl won the first place at the piano contest
The news said that she practices the piano everyday
I will practice hard like her to win the first place at the piano contest

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Student's Writing

I am practicing playing the piano to become a pianist
Lately,I heard the news that a small girl won the first place at the piano contest
The news said that she practicing the piano everyday
The news said that she practices the piano everyday.

I will practice hard like her to win the first place at the piano contest