Student's Writing

My mom and I went to the market to buy the ingredients of bread
We bought the flour,egg,and jam
I helped my mom while she was baking
We put the strawberry jam in it
It taste good

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Student's Writing
My mom and I went to the market to buy the ingredients of bread
We bought the flour,eggs,and jam
I helped my mom while she was baking bread
We put the strawberry jam in it
It tasted good