Student's Writing

We took to field trip the art gallery today
The admission fee of the gallery was 4000 won
I saw the paintings by chinese painter
The painting was original
The chinese paintings were different from the korean
Seeing the painting 

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Student's Writing
We took a field trip to the art gallery today
The admission fee of the art gallery was 4000 won
I saw the paintings by Chinese painters
The paintings were original
The Chinese paintings were different from the Korean paintings
Seeing the paintings from other countries paintings from was a good experience