Student's Writing

My mother bought me a computer
She told me to use it carefully
She was worried that I might use it wrong way
I promised to use it carefully
I will study and play games with have the computer

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Student's Writing
My mother bought me a computer
She told me to use it carefully
She was worried that I might use it wrong way 
She was worried that I might use it in the wrong way.

I promised to use it carefully
I will study and play games with the computer