Student's Writing
Title: About Myself

My name is ji-woo
I am 12 years old
My brother is 11 years old
My brother is 8 years old.

I have father,mother,and a brother
I have a grandfather and a grandmother.

I love my family

아래의 글은 전에 작성된 선생님의 첨삭물입니다.  새로운 첨삭물을 보낼 때는 아래의 글을 삭제하십시오.
Student's Writing
Title: About Myself

My name is ji-woo
I am 12 years old
My brother is 11 years old
I have father,mother,and a brother
I love my family

아래의 글은 전에 작성된 선생님의 첨삭물입니다.  새로운 첨삭물을 보낼 때는 아래의 글을 삭제하십시오.
Student's Writing
My name is ji-woo
I am 12 years old
My brother is 11 years old
I have father,mother,brother,grandmother
I have father, mother, and a brother.
I have a grandfather and a grandmother.

I love my family