Student's Writing

My uncle bought a box of chocolates today.
There was vanilla cream in the chocolate.
It was the sweet chocolate that I loved.
But my mom dosen't like the sweet chocolate.
All of my family ate chocolates except my mom.

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Student's Writing
My uncle bought a box of chocolates today.
There was vanilla cream in the chocolate.
It was the sweet chocolate that I loved.
But my mom dosen't like the sweet chocolate.
All of my family ate chocolates except my mom.