Student's Writing

I went to the market with my mom today.
My mom listed the things to buy at the market.
We bought food for my dad's upcoming birthday party.
One thing that caught my eye was the cake.
I think my dad will be happy tonight.

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Student's Writing
I went to the market with my mom today.
My mom listed the things to buy at the market.
We bought food for my dad's upcoming birthday party.
One thing that caught my eye was the cake.
I think my dad will be happy tonight.