Student's Writing

My favorite subject is music. 
I like to play the piano .
I won the first place in the piano contest.
I sometimes play the piano at church.
I will become a great pianist

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Student's Writing
Title:my favorite subject                      ?(/ ^.^ /)?
My favorite subject is music.
I like to play the piano .
I won the first place in the piano contest.
I sometimes play the church.
I sometimes play the piano at church.

I great pianist
I will become a great pianist.