Student's Writing

there was a small mountain fire yesterday
the fire was started by a small bonfire
no one turned off the fire 
fortunately,the damage wasnt big
however the fire is dangerous 
we have to be careful with fire

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Student's Writing
there was a small mountain fire yesterday
the fire was started by a small bonfire
no one turned off the fire 
fortunately,the damage wasnt big
Fortunately, the damage wasn't big.

however the fire is dangerous 
we have to be careful with fire