Student's Writing

Title: train
I took the train to my grandmother's house today.
There were many people on the train
I bumped into the door of train
Train was very crowded
But taking the train very fun

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Student's Writing
Title: train
I took the train to my grandmother's house today.
There were many people on the train
I bumped into the door of train
Train was very crowded
But taking the train very fun