Student's Writing

Date:????.??.?? ???
weather: rainy :(
Title:computer
My computer was broken
I wanted to play computer games
I visited jin-su's house
I played it for long time
So it seems that jin-su's got angry

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Student's Writing
Date:????.??.?? ???
weather: rainy :(
Title:computer
My computer was broken
I wanted to play computer games
I visited jin-su's house
I played games using Jin-su's computer.

I played it for long time
So it seems that jin-su's got angry