Student's Writing

Title: computer
My mother bought me a computer
She told me to use it carefully
She was worried that I might use it in the wrong way
I promised to use it carefully
I will study and play games with computer

아래의 글은 전에 작성된 선생님의 첨삭물입니다.  새로운 첨삭물을 보낼 때는 아래의 글을 삭제하십시오.
Student's Writing

Title: computer
My mother bought me a computer
She told me to use it carefully
She was worried that I might use it in the wrong way
I promised to use it carefully
I will study and play games with computer

아래의 글은 전에 작성된 선생님의 첨삭물입니다.  새로운 첨삭물을 보낼 때는 아래의 글을 삭제하십시오.
Student's Writing
Title: computer
My mother bought to me a computer
My mother bought me a computer.

She told me to use it carefully
She worried it use worng way
She was worried that I might use it in the wrong way.

I promised to use it carefully
I will study and play games with computer