Student's Writing

Title: Violin

I practiecd playing the violin for 4 hours today.
I like to play the violin.
My violin is brown and round.
My sister also likes to play the violin.
We will become great to musicians one day.

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Student's Writing
Title: Violin

I practiecd playing the violin for 4 hours today.
I like to play the violin.
My violin is brown and round.
My sister also likes to play the violin.
We will become great to musicians one day.
We will become great musicians one day.