Student's Writing

Title:chore

I helped to my mom.
I cleaned my room.
My brother cleaned his room.
My mom cleaned living room.
And she washed the dishes.
I helped the happy to my mom.

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Student's Writing
Title:chore

I helped to my mom.
I cleaned my room.
My brother cleaned his room.
My mom cleaned living room.
And she washed the dishes.
I helped the happy to my mom.
I was happy to help my mom.