Student's Writing

Title - Puzzle

I did a jigsaw puzzle with my brother.
It was hard to put it together.
But we completed the puzzle.
It was a picture of an elephant.
Jigsaw puzzle was fun.

아래의 글은 전에 작성된 선생님의 첨삭물입니다.  새로운 첨삭물을 보낼 때는 아래의 글을 삭제하십시오.
Student's Writing
Title - Puzzle

I did a jigsaw puzzle with my brother.
It was hard to put it together.
But we completed the puzzle.
But we completed the puzzle in the end.

It was a picture of an elephant.

Jigsaw puzzle was fun.
It was very fun to put together the jigsaw puzzle.