Student's Writing

title - my dad's birthday

Today is my dad's birthday.
I prepared birthday party for my dad.
I made a small cake.
He was so happy.
I was happy as well.

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Student's Writing
title - my dad's birthday

Today is my dad's birthday.
I prepared birthday party for my dad.
I prepared a party for my dad.

I made a small cake.
He was so happy.
I was happy as well.