Student's Writing

TItle: flu shot

This winter will cold.
So my mom told me get a flu shot.
SO my brother and I went to the hospital and got a flu shot.
It was very painful.
I praised My brother him for his braveness.
I hope that the vaccination is efficacious.

아래의 글은 전에 작성된 선생님의 첨삭물입니다.  새로운 첨삭물을 보낼 때는 아래의 글을 삭제하십시오.
Student's Writing
TItle: flu shot

This winter will cold.
It will be cold this winter.

So my mom told me get a flu shot.
So my mom told me to get a flu shot.

SO my brother and I went to the hospital and got a flu shot.
It was very painful.
I praised My brother him for his braveness.
I hope that the vaccination is efficacious.