Student's Writing

Title:die.t

I like eating very much.
Especially, I like hamburger, pizza, and chicken very much.
My mom says this foods make me fat.
I don't want to be fat.
So, I decided to go on a diet.
I will not eat dinner from tomorrow.

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Student's Writing
Title:die.t

I like eating very much.
Especially, I like hamburger, pizza, and chicken very much.
My mom says this foods make me fat.
My mom says that these foods make me fat.

I don't want to be fat.
So, I decided to go on a diet.
I will not eat dinner from tomorrow.