Student's Writing

Title: travel plans.

I will make winter vacation plans.
I want to go to the ski resort in this winter.
I heard that there is a famous ski resort in Gangwon-do.
Especially, people say that ski resort have wonderful scenery.
Considering all aspect, I will make best travel plans.

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Student's Writing
Title: travel plans.

I will make winter vacation plans.
I want to go to the ski resort in this winter.
I heard that there is a famous ski resort in Gangwon-do.
Especially, people say that ski resort have wonderful scenery.
Considering all aspect, I will make best the travel plans.