Evaluation Date: 2013-01-02 오후 5:32:34
Evaluation by: Eric  of Harvard University

At a Graduation ceremony there are a lot of people. 
--> Also can say lots instead of a lot.
People celebrate graduating from school.
--> Good, people are celebrating graduation.
They where caps and gowns. 
--> Wear not where.
They celebrate it at the end of the school year.
--> Good. 
You get a peace of paper telling you that you graduated.
--> Peice not peace.
 All the family members come to see this ceremoney. 
--> Ceremony not ceremoney.