Evaluation Date: 2012-12-18 오후 1:32:32
Evaluation by: Eric  of Harvard University

I like ice cream. It's so sweet.
--> Great. Nice job.

Especially I like chocolate ice cream.
--> You can also use this: My favorite is chocolate ice cream.

Chocolate goes well with ice cream.
--> You know this great expression! Awesome.

I like chocolate chips inside the ice cream.
--> Good.

When I chew the chips, they are broken into pieces in my mouth.
--> You may write 'inside of my mouth' instead of 'in my mouth'.

I like that.

But chocolate ice cream is sweeter than other kinds of ice cream.
--> Yeah, tha's the problem. How about adding 'too' before 'sweeter'?

How should I do?
--> Why did you add this sentence in the end? It doesn't have a meaning.